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Friday, 13 September 2019

Today's work

Hello bloggers,
My name is Alan and today I am going to tell you need to write a traditional tale.Usually you need these stuff :


  1. Traditional story starter ( eg: Once upon a time)
  2. Traditional characters ( eg : princess, prince, king, queen, fairy, genie, dragon, ogre, step-mother, witch, woodcutter, farmer, etc.)
  3. Good wins over evil ( eg: and suddenly the hero struck the sword in the witch's heart and she died)
  4. Traditional language( eg: in a far of land, every day)
  5. Accept of magic
  6. And last of all You need to plan then only you should write the real story                                    
This the story I wrote :
Once upon a time in a far away land there lived a  poor family with a boy named Ram.One day when the sky was like blue silk, he was taking a stroll he finds a door in the corner of his garden which he never saw.

When he opened the door, he couldn’t believe what he was seeing.He has landed In fairyland and do you want to guess what he was saying this was what he was saying ‘Unbelievable,Unbelievable,
Unbelievable, I must be dreaming’.

 After he had gone a little farther the door which led to his garden closed and then disappeared
There was nowhere to his garden.He was in real trouble now that the door closed and also he is in an  unknown area.If this problem is not solved he will be stuck in fairyland forever.

Just then an elf noticed him and came to him and said, “Are you a human”
Ram said trying to cheer up “I am a human”
The elf said ‘Then you are in trouble, there is a witch who wants a human for a magical spell that can destroy fairyland but no human has ever came here and only I have a weapon that can kill her but that weapon will only work if a human do it’
 Ram said ‘I will do it but can you please show me the way home after that’’
The elf said yes and he took him home and took the weapon  which shone like gold and led him to the cave where she lived.Just as he was going to enter the cave she came out and after she saw that it was human she brought out her weapon and starts to fight.It was her chance first she attacks him but he dodges.

Next it was Ram’s turn, he kills her with one or two strikes.After that the elf destroys the spell that she had made and then shows him the way home and also said he can come and visit her house anytime because I have completely opened the door that led you here. But when he returns home the elf also says that don’t lose the key which is the door’s key and whoever has the can only see the door.So he put the key in a secret place. The story dosen’t finish now there was a black magic cat that belonged to the witch and he was angry that the boy had destroyed his masters plan and decided to steal  the key that led Ram to the fairy land and then rule over fairyland over his power that the witch gifted him.

As the cat went into the door that led to fairyland she takes a magic ball that shows him the way to the key.There was a secret about the cat if there was pepper in him he will die instantly and that she will not have powers in the human world .As he went and took the key which is in the secret place.Ram saw her and he started to  throw things on him. One was pepper and as it hit him he died.Ram took that cat and buried him.After that he lived happily ever after and visiting fairy land sometimes.
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